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April 1, 2022 Leave a Comment

On the advice of my agent, I’ve started a monthly newsletter. How is it different than this space? For starters, it obviously appears more frequently, although I intend to remedy that. You can sign up here for book news, my baking successes (and inevitably some failures) and to see the remnants of the most recent special something Arlo has chewed to bits. Check out his  patented sorry/not sorry expression in the photo. With two years of Covid restrictions finally lifting, it’s turning into a busy year, with more events, readings and workshops. Check out the events page for updates. I can’t wait to meet with readers and other writers in real life! Hope to see you out in the world. 

 

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Things I’ve used to kill people, successfully and otherwise * 

January 24, 2021 Leave a Comment

(*in my books )

It’s always fun/stressful to come up with new and inventive ways to kill people in crime novels – which, by their very nature, require a body or two. Occasionally, too, a protagonist finds herself in a fight to the death, which in turn generally requires a weapon of some sort. 

I tend to shy away from guns, for the sole reason that it’s way to easy to get something about them wrong and then you look like an idiot and readers cease to trust you.  

So, instead I’ve used for actual and attempted slayings: 

  • A branding iron

 

 

 

 

 

 

  • A Zuni fetish 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  • A tarantula (not lethal, but scary as hell)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  • A bomb (boring) 

 

  • Pills (ditto) 

 

  • An ax (so not boring) 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  • A pickup

 

 

 

 

 

 

  • Boiling peaches (my favorite)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Most these required internet research into the types and efficacy of the injuries they’d cause. The photos accompanying that research would make the goriest slasher film look kindergarten-worthy by comparison. And, like every other crime writer I know, there’s always the fear of ending up on some weird watch list as a result. 

Anyhow, I’m about 15,000 words into a new manuscript and am already starting to contemplate the lethal weapon I’ll eventually need.  

If I’m honest, I’ll admit to some anticipation, too. Because what’s the strangest, yet most believably deadly thing I can come up with? One that’ll top the peaches? 

Stay tuned. 

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Some sort of love thing

December 16, 2020 Leave a Comment

 

I’ve just started a new novel and this time, this time, FOR REAL, I’m going to use an outline. 

Oh, ha ha ha. I crack myself up. 

But at least I’ve taken baby steps toward one, by writing a synopsis. The first draft of my most recent novel (and, let’s face it, every one before it) was an unholy mess, involving characters and scenes that ended up on the cutting room floor, which meant I wasted tons of time on stuff that never made it into the final version. It was the first time I had to push a deadline, although luckily the pandemic pushed it for me, with a much-delayed publishing date. 

Still, lesson learned. I vowed never to put myself through that again. 

But an outline! Sitting down to write every day knowing what was going to happen? On one level, it sounds lovely. On another, I’d really miss the surprise of the just-right plot twist that occurs out of nowhere when I’m stuck. 

Hence, the synopsis, something that leaves plenty of room for improvisation, but provides enough guidance to keep me from straying too far into the weeds. 

A few weeks ago, I signed up for a virtual and extremely helpful Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers program by Sharon Mignerey on “Writing the Dreaded Synopsis.” Armed with newfound knowledge, I filled out a handy chart with characters, plot twists and subplots. 

Turned out pretty well, if I say so myself. But something was missing. 

Oh. That. 

With every book, my wonderful and supremely patient agent, Richard Curtis, has given me the gentlest of nudges. “What about the love story?” 

By which I think he means sex, but whatever. 

Once again, when figuring out what the hell was going to happen next, I’d forgotten to add something besides ambition and fear to set my protagonist’s heart pounding. 

So, in the final blank space under subplots, I wrote:  

Some sort of love thing, 

I wonder what it will be?
 

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Trope-ity trope trope

December 3, 2020 Leave a Comment

 

 I recently gave a workshop that included a section on tropes – you know, the alcoholic detective, the hooker with a heart of gold, the pretty teenage victim – things that exist because of an element of truth, but that quickly become wearying. 

Change ‘em up, I said. Give that victim some agency (Tim Johnston’s Descent is my favorite example here.) 

Hardly original advice, illustrated far better than I by Halley Sutton’s recent column on noir tropes for CrimeReads: 

Those tropes are both a challenge and an opportunity for writers: there’s so many ways to become a cliche, low rent Raymond Chandler, and also so many opportunities to remake something out of the familiar into something new. 

I really liked her focus on noir, especially when she confessed that her definition is one to which I also default: I know it when I see it. 

A few years back I was fortunate enough to be asked to contribute a piece to one of Akashic Books’ terrific noir series; in this case Montana Noir. I love the way the entire concept of that book turned the noir trope – urban alleyways cloaked in damp, swirling fog — on its head. If you think the mean streets of LA are scary, wait until you find yourself on a Montana prairie with no law enforcement for fifty miles. 

My main character in that story was a hapless student in an MFA program, and the full-figured femme fatale lived in a house trailer and favored peasant blouses over negligees. She also kicked his ass. 

In retrospect, I realize I applied my own advice about tropes to that story (whew). I wish I could say I did it purposefully, but I think it had more to do with the fact that I was too freaked out to try and emulate classic noir, so I tried something different.  

I had a lot of fun writing that story, which I suppose is the message here, as much as there is one: If you enjoy what you’re writing, chances are your readers will, too. 

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Distanced learning

October 26, 2020 Leave a Comment

 

Workshopping around a fire with Pam Houston

 

Back in the blissfully ignorant days before my first book was published, I thought that once I saw that book in print, the next would come easily. 

Silly, silly writer.  

Keith McCafferty, a Bozeman writer whose Sean Stranahan mysteries prominently feature fly-fishing, shared an excellent mantra – “Each book better than the one before” — which of course only serves to make each one more difficult. 

Luckily, there are a lot of resources out there to help writers get better. Until the pandemic, I usually found these at writers’ conferences such as Bouchercon, a mystery writers’ convention, and Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers’ annual Colorado Gold conference. I would return to my writing re-energized, with all sorts of new tips at my disposal. 

Both those conferences went virtual this year, and I missed both, due to a pretty challenging work situation. But I found other, more manageable, and equally socially distanced events that I hope will help kick my writing up to the next level. 

I took “Otherness in Fiction: Getting It Right,” a two-class workshop from Gabino Iglesias (Coyote Songs) on how to avoid embarrassing and offensive mistakes in writing about people of other and races and cultures. That’s always been supremely important, but it feels as though it’s finally getting the emphasis it deserves. 

I was fortunate enough to take a long-weekend workshop from one of my favorite writers, Pam Houston (Deep Creek, Cowboys Are My Weakness) in a mountain lodge outside Telluride, Colorado, that also served as a benefit for Great Old Broads for Wilderness. It featured lots of writing exercises, along with the energy and enthusiasm that comes from hearing other writers read great work. I’d fallen into a bit of a funk, writing-wise, but have made more progress in the weeks since returning than in those that preceded it. 

 

Colorado’s mountain meadows make distancing easy.

And, finally, yesterday I took a two-hour class from Sharon Mignerey (A Sacred Trust), sponsored by Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers, on “The Dreaded Synopsis.” There were nearly 40 of us on the Zoom call, so clearly I’m not alone in my dread. Again, I came away with helpful information that I’m eager to apply to my next project. 

As of February, I’ll have seven books in print, and an eighth is making the rounds of publishers in hopes of finding a home. My younger, inexperienced self would have thought that by now, I’d have it all figured out. (And maybe other writers do. I just don’t know any.) 

What I have figured out is that part of the joy, as well as the pain, of the writing process lies in the learning. It’s the only way to make sure the next book is better than the one before. 

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Introducing Nora Best

September 28, 2019 4 Comments

Psyched to announce some good news – that I’ve signed a contract with British publisher Severn House for two crime novels featuring a protagonist named Nora Best.

I’m doubly psyched because my previous series featuring reporter Lola Wicks effectively ended when my publisher, Midnight Ink, shut down. It’s fun to be starting something with a new protagonist and a whole new set of circumstances.

All I’ll say about Nora is that she’s not a journalist, and at the beginning of the first book, tentatively titled Best Laid Plans, finds herself newly single. Oh, and an Airstream trailer is integral to the plot. Why an Airstream? Because I want one, and writing about one is probably as close as I’ll get to ever having one.

But because writing the novel involves endless—very necessary!—time on Airstream sites and blogs, whenever I log on I’m now beset by ads for trailers I’ll never be able to afford. Clearly the Airstream people know nothing about writer/journalists’ incomes.

The first book is tentatively set to come out in the UK in May, and then in the United States three months later.

Watch this spot for updates on Nora’s travels.

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If at first you don’t succeed, revise, revise again

March 24, 2019 Leave a Comment

 

I had so much fun last month, hiding away in Undisclosed Location to revise and polish a manuscript to send to my agent.

Who sent it right back with some cogent remarks as to why it wasn’t ready.

“Are you OK?” people ask when I tell them this. Sometimes followed by what a tongue-tangled friend used to call “asparagus remarks” about my agent.

They seem skeptical when I respond that not only am I all right, I feel lucky to have an agent who helps save me from myself. (If you already have, or manage to find, an agent like this, I hope you’ve placed him or her on the world’s tallest pedestal.)

The book was probably OK, too. But just OK. And remainder tables (not to mention rejection piles) are full of just-OK books. My mantra has always been “each book better than the one before,” and if this one wasn’t doing the job, then I’m happy to take another whack or two or three at it to get it right.

University of Georgia Carnegie Library

Without going into detail, his suggestions meant ditching about half the book. Admittedly, that part did sting. But only for about a minute. Now, a couple of weeks later, I’m back in the rhythm of trying to write 500 words on weekdays and please God at least double that on weekends, rediscovering the pleasure of writing new scenes that take unexpected turns. Today I was kind to my protagonist, sending her to a Carnegie library for her research—a nice break before I resume throwing spike strips across her path.

Also today, the reconstituted manuscript hit 50,000 words, a good halfway point where sheer momentum tends to take over. Far in the distance, but beginning to emerge, the ending awaits. For now, though, I’m going to focus on enjoying the journey.

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Me, the WIP, and an Undisclosed Location

February 18, 2019 2 Comments

Awhile back, Belfast-born author Adrian McKinty wrote a funny piece for the Guardian about retreating to a cabin in Australia with his work-in-progress, sure that the time away from family and other obligations would help him crush a deadline.

“The perils of writing in solitude,” he called it, and it was indeed perilous. The downpour began the first night. It turned cold. The cabin had no heat. The pub in town had closed and the only store sold baked beans and beer and nothing more in the way of food. The rain turned to snow. He lasted three nights, concluding:

“Solitude may be the school of genius but if you’re looking to cure writer’s block or meet a deadline, it isn’t everyone’s cup of tea.”

I don’t know about that genius bit (unless you’re McKinty, and if you haven’t read his novels, you should), but solitude is seriously my cup of tea. In search of it, I applied for three separate artists’ residencies this year and got turned down by all three.

Upon hearing that, a family friend offered a cabin—one light years removed, thank God, from McKinty’s drafty, miserable retreat. (Note: Friends like this deserve pedestals, haloes, undying gratitude and a dandy bottle of whiskey.)

I signed up for whatever remained of my vacation time, left home on a below-zero day, and arrived at a warm and toasty hideaway. I’m all for writing before work (and after) and on weekends, but my WIP was in crisis stage, a fairly decent beginning and end, but the middle, oh, the dreaded middle. It was a wasteland.

For me, at least, that sort of thing takes concerted concentration, and it took several days to find my way out of the morass. Now, powered by the patented index-card method (outline each chapter on a card, then add, subtract and shuffle until the damn things are in the right order) and big pots of my grandmother’s pasta e fagioli recipe, there’s hope. All thanks to solitude.

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Happy New Year, with resolutions

January 2, 2019 2 Comments

As I slog back through the first draft of Book Seven, cutting, cutting (where the hell did all those useless paragraphs come from?), and wondering how I’m going to fill the giant gaping holes in the plot, I come across little notes to myself in the ms.

Some are pretty obvious: Check on a name. (Did I really give two different characters the same name? Yah, you betcha.) Fix the timeline. (Oh, wait. I never made a timeline. Which is probably why—once I count the days—I’ve ended up with a courtroom scene on a Saturday. Sorry about that, Judge. You don’t have to work on your day off after all.)

But then I found one on a particularly uninspired piece of writing. I’m talking limp as overcooked pasta, and just about as unappetizing. It said simply: “Do this better.”

I fired off a quick tweet & FB post about it, something to the effect that it could apply to the whole book. And it could.

This being New Year’s Day, “do better” works as a great resolution. The novelist Laura Lippman has a terrific tradition of posting a one-word resolution each year and asking people to do the same. It’s inspiring to read through people’s posts, and their reasons for the word they’ve chosen.

Mine? Achieve.

With two books published within four months of each other, 2018 was a great year in many ways. But you know what didn’t happen while I was promoting those books, and working on three other writing-related projects? Work on a new novel.

Book Seven got to first draft phase right about the time Silent Hearts came out, and then languished. So here’s my resolution that 2019 will see it get the attention it deserves, with darlings jettisoned, holes filled, names and timelines straightened out, and the writing done better.

Onward.

And, Happy New Year!

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Happy book birthday, Silent Hearts

July 23, 2018 2 Comments

“A tasty read,” says Fiona

Awhile back, I wrote here that “the pub date for Silent Hearts is still six interminable months out.”

And now, a blink of an eye later, it’s here.

Publishing is a long, long game. Two years, in this case, from the offer on the manuscript to a book on the shelves. Four years from when I embarked on what I vowed would be my last, best attempt at rewriting said manuscript. Fifteen from when I first started putting words on the page about two women, one Pakistani, one American, who ended up as Farida and Liv in the final version.

The manuscript languished untouched for some of those years. Others, I attacked it mercilessly, probably cutting the equivalent of another whole book over the years. Titles came and went, so many that one of my fiction goals is to someday see a book published with my own title – which may be even more difficult than getting a book published at all.

I’ve made this point too many times before, so I won’t belabor it here. But I’ve seen so many wonderful writers give up after just a few rejections, which means so many good books that the world will never see. That makes me sad.

But today is not a day for sadness. The joint launch party for Silent Hearts – and for Melissa Stephenson’s memoir, “Driven: A White-Knuckled Ride to Heartbreak and Back” – is tomorrow night. I hear there will be cake. If that’s not cause for celebration, I don’t know what is.

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